Thursday, March 23, 2017

Basic Essay Outline

Similarities: Brian and Chuck both found and ate food.
Brian hunted for berries. Then, Chuck hunted for berries.
They both had fish spears. They both decided to live after attempting suicide.







Differences: Brian and Chuck both have differences.
Chuck kept memories to his loved one Kelly.
Brian kept some memories.
Brian didn't have a friend to talk to.
Chuck had a friend to talk to.
Chuck hunted for crabs and fish.
Brian hunted for berries and fool birds.
Chuck didn't have any thing to use.
Brian had a hatchet to use for some stuff.

Brian and Chuck both knew how to make a
fire. Chuck lived in a cave. Brian lived in a
shelter he built.

Wednesday, March 22, 2017

the past and the present

The author wanted Brain to  remember when he was on the plane.
and when he crashed in a lake. Next, he had bugs on him.Then, He tried to take them off.
So he built a shelter so he could try to survive. He was their for 47 days.
he also had a hatchet. 



I'm kind of different because I sometimes have to try to work harder.
in the past i had longer hair. but now my hair is short.
and I was a little bit shorter.and I kind of have a learning problem.
I like the future better than the past because I should always try my best.


Tuesday, March 21, 2017

Letter to the brain



Dear Brian,

Brian found out about the divorce which is called the secret.
Brian would kind of be happier if his parents didn't get a divorce.
Brian's dad probably felt sad and terrible.
Then maybe his Dad felt upset.
His Dad probably wanted to tell his son that he be careful in the wilderness.
then he should tell him to find his way home.

yours truly your father